Annaleise

Annaleise

Thursday, April 26, 2012

Expert
  • Shows weeks of work
  • Audience is very interested
  • I've done the work myself
  • Research in my words – with my personality in it
  • Contains humour(?)
  • Interaction with the audience
  • Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
  • PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or videos and plays automatically

Practitioner
  • Shows three or four weeks of work
  • Research is mostly in my own words
  • Information is interesting and in my own words
  • Adults have supported me without doing work for me
  • Some humour (?)
  • Some interaction with the audience
  • Audience is attentive and interested
  • Speech is clear
  • PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or video

Apprentice
  • Shows about a week’s work
  • A little research – some in my own words
  • Adults have done some of the work for me
  • No interaction with the audience
  • No humour
  • Poor presentation
  • Few pictures
  • Mostly reads the info from the PowerPoint / presentation

Novice
  • Reads the words on the presentation
  • Clearly started at the last minute
  • Hardly any info
  • Parents have done a lot of it for me
  • No pictures or steps
  • Research is straight off the internet
  • No humour
  • Not finished on time
  • Untidy presentation
  • Speech is not very clear

23 comments:

  1. Sam says..... I liked how you did it on something you like.
    Next time try not to mumble.

    Caleb Says...... I liked how you did something you could visit and we could go to but next time you could of put more infomation in your P.I.

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  2. I reeeeaaaallllyyyy liked your topic. It was very interesting and original. You could have looked up at the audience while you were speaking and spoke slower. Other than that amazing!!! Grace

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  3. I really liked your P.I. and You had lots of photos but next time you could have a little bit more info.

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  4. wow great pi. i liked the photos. and i like your topic. but you could look at the audience.

    from jaxon

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  5. you were great but next time you could have more information and a better slide. you were great. i might have to start saveing up.

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  6. Swoosh swing I can see it now going down the luge. Pretty cool. I want to go there again after that PI. Wow and the way you explained it not to long not to short just right. I the only inpromant would be the pics. There cool but some of you in them would be awsome. But that was cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

    From saul

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  7. Nice P.I. Anna
    I liked how you had creative pictures and more than one picture on a slide. Next time you could speak clearer and look at the audience.
    From Camryn Mabey.

    Cool Pi Anna I really liked how you did it short but interesting. I have been myself to the luge and its fun.
    Next time you could have only one pic on a slide and a bit longer.

    From Cam Pita

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  8. that was AWESOME!!!!!! maybe next time look at your audience. and have a tinsy bit more information

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  9. You have really made me want me go to the luge. You had lots of photos maybe next time have a bit more info. Jouner :)

    Great photos Annaleise! Next time you need to make sure that you dont get too much info off the internet and make your PI a little bit longer. :0
    Jam

    You sure want to go to the luge now. I liked your PI cause it had pictures that you could actully see. Next time you could make it a bit longer cause you were speaking fast so it seemed that it went really fast :) Maddi

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  10. wonderfull P.I Annaleise i loved the photos but next time you could look at the audience a little bit more


    By Campbell :p

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  12. I liked your P.I cause you did it on something you liked and did. I think you should work on is try to speak clearly

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  13. really good next time a little more info and other than that it was superwow

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  14. i really liked your P.I it makes me want to go next time put a little more info

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  15. it was good now i what to go but it was a little sort and you was don't clear in your speaking at times but it was very good

    from violet

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  16. Terrific P.I Anna. Next time maybe include more info. But on the bright side, there were lots of interesting pictures and a very innovative idea of using Docs instead of PowerPoint.Maybe speak clearer because I was on the yellow bench and my ears were straining. Once again great P.I Annaleise. :)

    Josh

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  17. noah said..... well done next time make it longer


    tom says..... well done next time can you make it a bit longer



    salma says... well done anna i kindof knew everything cause i've been to it next time make it a bit longer other than that good work :)

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  18. Yippeeeeee!!!!!! Great PI, Annaleise. You started with something that interests you - and it was a topic that the others enjoyed too. I am so pleased with the way you spoke - with so much confidence and clarity. Thank you for not reading a whole lot of words from your slides :) I would have liked to see more photos, but the ones you had were very cool. Well done, Annaleise.

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  19. Great PI Anna your spoke clear and you had some AMAZING pictures But next time you can speak slower Cindy

    Anna that was AMAZZZING you had some great info and really COOL pictures and now I REALLY WANT TO GO TO THE LUDGE!!! But next time you could speak a little clearer Bex

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  20. cool P.I anna next time try put more info

    by Jo Jo

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  21. Wow great PI. Great topic as well. I really enjoyed the luge. But maybe next time use a different Software

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  22. You did very well and it was to sort

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  23. I really enjoyed that you spoke really clearly but you could have gotten a little more information ireally want to go now.

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