Expert
- Shows weeks of work
- Audience is very interested
- I've done the work myself
- Research in my words – with my personality in it
- Contains humour(?)
- Interaction with the audience
- Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or videos and plays automatically
Practitioner
- Shows three or four weeks of work
- Research is mostly in my own words
- Information is interesting and in my own words
- Adults have supported me without doing work for me
- Some humour (?)
- Some interaction with the audience
- Audience is attentive and interested
- Speech is clear
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or video
Apprentice
- Shows about a week’s work
- A little research – some in my own words
- Adults have done some of the work for me
- No interaction with the audience
- No humour
- Poor presentation
- Few pictures
- Mostly reads the info from the PowerPoint / presentation
Novice
- Reads the words on the presentation
- Clearly started at the last minute
- Hardly any info
- Parents have done a lot of it for me
- No pictures or steps
- Research is straight off the internet
- No humour
- Not finished on time
- Untidy presentation
- Speech is not very clear
Cool pi Anna liked your info but next time try put in a Quiz our something
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Luke says...
ReplyDeleteCool but wierd P.I I liked how you spook so clearly. Next time you could have more eye contact but cool P.I.
Camryn Mabey says...
It was awesome how you did your P.I. on a wonder and made everyone interested. Next time don't mumble when you are talking.
Nice P.I Anna.
ReplyDeleteI don't really beleive in big foot but alot of people do and you didn't say you did or not.
But other than that great work.
AWESOME P.I. Anna I liked how it was a P.I. that everybody would of been interested in. Next time you could of had videos of sightings but otherwise AMAZING!!!
ReplyDeletethat was such an interesting PI and Big foot is real. So maybe next time have some expression in your voice.
ReplyDeleteYou brave girl, Annaleise! You actually looked as if you were enjoying yourself! My suggestion would be to 1. Make your voice clearer by slowing down and saying your terminal consonants (eg the 't' at the end of Big Foot), and 2. when you find a measurement in feet or inches etc. you need to convert it to metres.
ReplyDeleteAnaliese, your P.I was AWESOME!!! I liked how you did that thing at the end when it said I'm watching you. But next time make eye contact with the auidience.
ReplyDeleteCool P.I Anna.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your topic.
I didn't see anything wrong with you P.I.
FROM JAS!!!:)
GRAET P.I Anna
I thought that you had allot of info.
Next time you could speak a little bit slower.
Sam
Cool Anna . You didn't change my mind tho but good work. Next time could talk more confidently and slow.
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BigFoot here I comw. Wow Anna that was amazing that was a very interesting P.I. next time you maybe like put a bit of something more I don't know what because your P.I. was so fantastic Anna. Next time I bet your next P.I. will be even more amazing.
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WOW amazing PI Anna like how you had some humour and tones of voice next time talk slower
ReplyDeleteLauren
You Had a very good P.I Anna.You made your P.I better and that you did it on "Big Foot".
ReplyDeleteI bet you can do an even better P.I next time.You could work on some expression and do a quiz or some think to do with the class.Maybe speak up a little and use hand gestures while speaking and smile when you are talking. India :)
Great pi but I coundn't hear you well. violet
Great work Anna.
ReplyDeleteI like the topic. The big and mysterious Bigfoot.
Next time you could talk a little slower.
Very persuading but I still don't believe in bigfoot anyway good info the only thing to improve on is a clear speaking voice.
ReplyDeleteTom
AWESOME PI Anna. Now I don't know if I believe in BIGFOOT or not??? I liked how you made us do Bigfoot noises but next time... Um... Next time maybe include some more audience participation.
ReplyDeleteEPIC P.I Anna but next time you could have a Quiz or something that involes the audince.
ReplyDeleteFrom Campbell
Awesome PI Annaleise! That was a good persuasion. Sorry, but I am still NOT believing in bigFoot. I think you need to have more like contrast with your text. Jam :)
ReplyDeleteCool PI Anna. I liked how you believe in bigFoot, cause I do. Your slide show was really good. No words and lots of pictures.Next time you could maybe speak a bit clearer and slow down a bit. I couldn't understand what you were saying that much.
Cool anyways,
Grace
wow I really liked your P.I I liked how you chose big foot but next time more in fo jaide
Great PI Annaleise I liked how you spoke clear and you had a cool topic but next time speek louder ~Cindy
Great P.I Anna I really liked your topic and also liked how you made us do a howl.But next time you could speak a bit slower
ReplyDeleteWow Anna that wa so awesome.
ReplyDeleteI dont really no if he is reall or not.
But next time you could speake slower
Nice PI Anna. You had lots of info but maybe next time speak slower. ~Bex???
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