Annaleise
Wednesday, November 21, 2012
My P.I
Expert
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or videos and plays automatically
Practitioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Research is mostly in my own words
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour (?)
Some interaction with the audience
Audience is attentive and interested
Speech is clear
PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or video
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little research – some in my own words
Adults have done some of the work for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Mostly reads the info from the PowerPoint / presentation
Novice
Reads the words on the presentation
Clearly started at the last minute
Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Research is straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
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Great P.I Anna!
ReplyDeleteI might start my own business.
Next time could have talked a bit slower.
Other than that...
Awesome P.I!!!
I thought that was very great how you did it on something you like. next time speak better
ReplyDeleteAWESOME P.I. Anna!
ReplyDeleteIt was such a good idea to have us try find the words because itkeepedus interested and listening. Next time you could have had the competition just after the P.I. From Camryn Mabey!
Nice Pi Anna.
ReplyDeleteI might start my own business.
But next time you could speak a bit slower
Nice P.I Anna.
ReplyDeleteThat made me want to open my own buiseness now.
Next time talk slower
C-Dog says...
ReplyDeleteThat was interesting about the dogs and the reference I loved the interaction with the audience it was something different and awesome but you needed to talk slower as I couldn't understand what you said.
Noah says
what an interesting P.I Anna it was a great idea of different letters but you could speak slower
Ok PI but I under stand you that well and hear you.
ReplyDeleteViolet
Great PI Anna I liked how you did that cunning idea!!!! Look up though Anna.
Sarah ~~~ :)
Wow i loved the secrect words and letters but it needed more slides but other than that it was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteBy Campbell!!!!
JOsh says...........
WELL DONE. YOU MADE QUITE AN EFFORT IN THIS PI. I CAN TELL. NEXT TIME MAYBE YOU COULD HAVE MADE A SCRIPT.
JOSH
AMAZING! you did well when you spoke to the audience. Next time use some expression and look up to the audience.Well Done Anna!
ReplyDelete~India
Cool PI Anna. I liked how you did it on a dog walking bushiness cause you like dogs.I think that you can really do it!!! Next time you could slow down at the START of the PI. I also liked your way of telling us about the competition.
Grace
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Great PI like the topic the business idea and competition.But it could have been longer.
Lauren:)
Nice job, Annaleise. You have become more and more confident with your public speaking. You looked as if you were really enjoying yourself. I think you should have shown us your Mindmeister map and made sure you had your flyers to show us. I hope you are able to follow your dog dreams, Anna.
ReplyDeleteGreat PI Anna I liked how you chose a subject you are into and it was really interesting but in the future you could speak slower.
ReplyDeleteJaide
That was such a cool P.I. Anna but in the future you could speak slower.
Rumer
Wow Anna I loved your P.I but next time you could speak ssslllooowwweeerrr and next time you could make it more interesting and more slides but I liked how you did it on something you love and are passionate for.
By Nakeita Jamieson
Ok PI but I couldn't under stand you that well and couldn't hear you that well. violet
ReplyDeleteThat was a great PI Anna. No faults apart from not bringing the flyer which wasn't exactly your fault and not showing us your mindmeister map.
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