Annaleise

Annaleise

Wednesday, November 21, 2012

My P.I

Expert Shows weeks of work Audience is very interested I've done the work myself Research in my words – with my personality in it Contains humour(?) Interaction with the audience Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or videos and plays automatically Practitioner Shows three or four weeks of work Research is mostly in my own words Information is interesting and in my own words Adults have supported me without doing work for me Some humour (?) Some interaction with the audience Audience is attentive and interested Speech is clear PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or video Apprentice Shows about a week’s work A little research – some in my own words Adults have done some of the work for me No interaction with the audience No humour Poor presentation Few pictures Mostly reads the info from the PowerPoint / presentation Novice Reads the words on the presentation Clearly started at the last minute Hardly any info Parents have done a lot of it for me No pictures or steps Research is straight off the internet No humour Not finished on time Untidy presentation Speech is not very clear

13 comments:

  1. Great P.I Anna!
    I might start my own business.
    Next time could have talked a bit slower.
    Other than that...
    Awesome P.I!!!

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  2. I thought that was very great how you did it on something you like. next time speak better

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  3. AWESOME P.I. Anna!
    It was such a good idea to have us try find the words because itkeepedus interested and listening. Next time you could have had the competition just after the P.I. From Camryn Mabey!

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  4. Nice Pi Anna.
    I might start my own business.
    But next time you could speak a bit slower

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  5. Nice P.I Anna.
    That made me want to open my own buiseness now.
    Next time talk slower

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  6. C-Dog says...
    That was interesting about the dogs and the reference I loved the interaction with the audience it was something different and awesome but you needed to talk slower as I couldn't understand what you said.


    Noah says
    what an interesting P.I Anna it was a great idea of different letters but you could speak slower

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  7. Ok PI but I under stand you that well and hear you.

    Violet


    Great PI Anna I liked how you did that cunning idea!!!! Look up though Anna.

    Sarah ~~~ :)

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  8. Wow i loved the secrect words and letters but it needed more slides but other than that it was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    By Campbell!!!!

    JOsh says...........

    WELL DONE. YOU MADE QUITE AN EFFORT IN THIS PI. I CAN TELL. NEXT TIME MAYBE YOU COULD HAVE MADE A SCRIPT.

    JOSH

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  9. AMAZING! you did well when you spoke to the audience. Next time use some expression and look up to the audience.Well Done Anna!

    ~India


    Cool PI Anna. I liked how you did it on a dog walking bushiness cause you like dogs.I think that you can really do it!!! Next time you could slow down at the START of the PI. I also liked your way of telling us about the competition.
    Grace
    :]


    Great PI like the topic the business idea and competition.But it could have been longer.
    Lauren:)

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  10. Nice job, Annaleise. You have become more and more confident with your public speaking. You looked as if you were really enjoying yourself. I think you should have shown us your Mindmeister map and made sure you had your flyers to show us. I hope you are able to follow your dog dreams, Anna.

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  11. Great PI Anna I liked how you chose a subject you are into and it was really interesting but in the future you could speak slower.

    Jaide


    That was such a cool P.I. Anna but in the future you could speak slower.

    Rumer

    Wow Anna I loved your P.I but next time you could speak ssslllooowwweeerrr and next time you could make it more interesting and more slides but I liked how you did it on something you love and are passionate for.

    By Nakeita Jamieson

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  12. Ok PI but I couldn't under stand you that well and couldn't hear you that well. violet

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  13. That was a great PI Anna. No faults apart from not bringing the flyer which wasn't exactly your fault and not showing us your mindmeister map.

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